Moon
I want to watch it glow little by little, along the river, in the aster garden, over the high hill, among the waves. I want to watch it through the lush forest, star light tangles my golden gown,...
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I want to watch it glow little by little, along the river, in the aster garden, over the high hill, among the waves.Nice images here, I find the relationship difficult to imagine though between the...
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Lovely, but the syntax is uninteresting. I would like to see what happens if you strip out most of the bland language and attempt to get a little more milage from the syntax. Just to show you what I...
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Hi Joshua,Sorry to be late to reply this.Thanks for your wondersul suggestions.I agree with you, they are very helpful review.I will revise it soon.Anna
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Lo QII love your revision, very neat way and fresh....Glad to have your inputs. another style and creative way.Thanks a lot.Regards,Anna
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